Directions： Study the following picture carefully and write an essay in which you should

　　1. describe the picture

　　2. interpret its implied meaning,and

　　3. give your own comment.

讓爺爺幫助孫子做作業(yè)

　　特別提示：這是中國社會現(xiàn)象的一個寫作模塊

　　Grandfather Doing Homework for His Grandson

　　As is vividly betrayed in the drawing above, the grandfather is so tired as to sleep(doze off),for he has[現(xiàn)在完成進行時] been doing all his grandson's homework. And we can find that [用過渡詞語] the undone homework is still before this excessively overworked old man.[這句話描寫得很好] The drawing exposes a common phenomenon in our society. How thought-provoking it is!

　　The implied meaning of the drawing is worth discussing. To begin with, the youngster generation are not working hard so much as older generation since they are not willing to do all the jobs by themselves. Take boring [名詞包裝表達你的語氣和態(tài)度] homework as example. Very often it is found that all these tasks are left to parents and grandparents[用同義詞語]. Is it unilateral responsibility for the youngster generation? I think it's partly because the old generation should undertake the responsibility for this phenomenon. The older generation love their youngsters too dearly that they fear the youngster generation may bear a little suffering； so the old, if possible, do everything for the young. The result is that the old generation are excessively overworked while [對比關系] the youngster generation are becoming useless without fundamental life skills.

　　To conclude, as solid youngsters, in my view, we can not go father and fly higher if we youth excessively depend on the old generation. [此句運用得很好] And the older generation should encourage youngsters to make their own careers[正面論證]. As long as much trained in difficulties and challenges, [年輕人只有經(jīng)過磨練,百煉成鋼,這樣的含義需要寫出來]we Chinese youths will soon be strong players in this competitive globe.

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